both were decent takes for 1 go at it I voted for jay about 20 seconds into the tune it reminded me of shaking by eddie money s-s-s-so keep on hammerin u 2.
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like willy said, both good for first takes. but Im also going for Jay. I think he had some better structure going on. And the first half was pretty good. Keep playing guys!
A good begining effort by both of you, went with Jay just because his seemed to have a little more structure, and that Eddie Money type thing in there. Keep it both of you.
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