Hey everybody ,
I wrote these 2 songs & i would appreciate any opinion ,advice or criticism regarding the words ,mix ,vocals ,arrangement ,etc.
Nothing is harsh , please be honest.
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here are the Lyrics :
Where Moon is a Pearl
Well i was Lost & i was weak , didnt find the words to speak
by the time , you found me by the sea ,
so tell me how long has it been , since the day you let me in
you lived your life like a flower & i lived mine like a dream .
& your hair was dark as the night & it brushed against the sand , on the day that i saw you fall & i watched you hit the ground
your hand was cold , your touch was warm,
as i held you in my arms , you whispered so softly,
I'm with you to the end of time ,
but its time to say , goodbye my dear , i'm going , going away,
to where the Sun is Red , down where the grass is green ,
where the skies are so blue , like nothing you've ever seen,
& you can wash off your sins down the river
& if you're lost , you'll be safe , you will never turn away
its where Moon is A Pearl
stray dogs never live , to see the morning light
so keep your bird on the shoulder , wipe the dust off your heart
'cause with your mind on silver & your faith buried in the earth
at the end , you'll be nothing but bones in the dirt
so rinse your gold-plated hearts down the wishing well
soon the day will come & you'll be going away.
to where the sun is Red , down where the grass is green ,
& the skies are so blue , it's like nothing you've ever seen,
& you can wash off your sins down the river
where who you love will be near there's no heartache & no fear
its where Moon is A Pearl
Baby Don't Go
saw your suitcase by the door , your letter on the floor
is it true that you dont love me anymore?
so tell me whats been on your mind , when love is hard to find
you dont wanna go & leave it all behind
so baby dont go down the road for another day (x2)
'cause after all is said & done , you know you're my only one
baby dont go down the road for another day
Now old pictures on the wall & all the memories they bring
i remember all the songs we used to sing
c i'm sorry if i hurt you , didnt wanna tella lie ,
its a house of love we've built its worth a try
so baby dont go down the road for another day (x2)
'cause after all is said & done , you know you're my only one
baby dont go down the road for another day
well i know all the things we wanted , are not everything we see
but when i see you smile , its all reason to be
baby i'll take you around the world & i'll be with you all the way
let me show you woman , just stay for more day
so baby dont go down the road for another day (x2)
'cause after all is said & done , Baby you're my only one
baby dont go down the road for another day
THANX for listening 
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