Bleeding Heart melody

Here i post a song i wrote 3 month ago. When i compose this song i was a little depressed, cuz my bother had big problem with his wife (so that mean is son at the same time) and drug...i was feeling sad etc...
What i would like to know is what kind of class would this song be (cuz i would like to post it over GB 1 day), and if some1 want to do a drum track, just go ahead!thx!

[Stiglar]

that's a pretty nice idea .

what class's are there at gb ? i can't say i've ever been there .

i like the rhythm guitar .

[wahwah]

If you mean 'grades', everybody starts as a sort of rookie and depending on your ratingd from other people, you go up the ladder and become more 'professional'. I like the concept but can't get away with the the small file size or the serious amount of very similar shredders that are there! BUT there are some great players doing very original things as well...I'm only pissed cos I can't win a battle to save my life!

No i am alrady a GB member, but i would like to know should i post this song in Pop categories?or maybe in Rock??i dunno wich categorie THE SONG is...thx, and if u appreciate the song that's fine!

[CanyonCarver]

Daemon, I like the chord progression and the solo playing generally, but feel that tone-wise, the two guitars don't work the way they should.

You may also be a bit out of tune.

The accoustic is recorded very close, with that intimate sound, while the solo is full of reverb and more distant. Maybe the two should meet in the middle somewhere. If you can apply some chorus and a short delay to the accoustic guitar part, you may get a better unity between the two guitars and fill the space.

The solo tone is good, but may have excessive drive at times. Try backing off the distortion a bit or work the EQ to take off the booming sounds when you hit lower notes.

I'm no expert but I've done recordings a bit like this one and faced chalenges. This is what works for me. I hope you don't think I'm lecturing, but I'd rather share my true thoughts than praise people unconditionnaly, as it doesn't give them a chance to hear others' views.

Cheers!

[NewHalen5150]

I like it..suks you had to come up with it during your bros problems

thx for your sayin NewHalen, And i wanna thx Canyon, u're surely right about few thing in there, i apprecaite more people that can tell me the thruth like u just did, ill never take constructive criticism as insult! thx!