Drained (Demo)

[momot]

This is almost the first real song that I've completed. I know it sounds to get a bit boring cos of the song structure but it's more or less what I've accomplished. This one is using Digitech RP250 effects including the bass simulator ( I still don't have a bass guitar ).
I think I messed up the lead parts mostly getting out of tune and I think the solo is a bit down in the mix and I believe the tone sounds a bit too thin or trebley..... I actually played the first part out and copied and pasted the rest of it (I'm really that lazy to play the whole song).

http://rapidshare.com/files/24540192...ned__Demo_.mp3

[rob_on_guitar]

Sounds good man! From what i remember when I first heard you you have made improvements! I think its good to listen back once you have finished a recording and pick out the points you could improve on like you have, then rerecord at a later date and see if you can eliminate those points. Thats what Ive been doing anyways. Keep it up man!

[momot]

Originally Posted by rob_on_guitar

Sounds good man! From what i remember when I first heard you you have made improvements! I think its good to listen back once you have finished a recording and pick out the points you could improve on like you have, then rerecord at a later date and see if you can eliminate those points. Thats what Ive been doing anyways. Keep it up man!

Thanks rob.....
You're making great music with your online band....

[Max]

I like it, the riff in the beginning is really nice as is the melody the guitar is playing..

[momot]

Thanks to both Rob and Max for the comments.....
I still feel the songs is a bit lacklustre

[rob_on_guitar]

Alot of it will be just mixing. Sometimes its best to have the rythmn guitars a little bit quiet then double them. This site has some awesome tips that i found useful.
Good stuff!