09-24-2005, 11:22 AM
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Falling Down
Here's an original I've been working on that Wiz is gonna grace with a solo when he's up to it. I'm having some struggles with the mix so any feedback would help greatly. And as always, thanks for listening.
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09-24-2005, 11:30 AM
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Yeah, so what?
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Cristal clean sounding here. Very catchy one, I really liked it. Loved those short burst riffs, nice tone  Vox great as well. Great work you did here 
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09-24-2005, 11:33 AM
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I GARAWWWNTEE!!!!!
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Awesome job here Bob!!! great guitar work!!!! tones are fantastic, very retro!! and the vocals are killer, made me think of old Cream, Eric Clapton style, which is big time in my book!!! Fantastic!!! 
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09-24-2005, 01:07 PM
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Valhalla is coming !!!!!
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sounds good to me Van , and dude your so near Gillan it untrue . Starts of like Sylvia , sounds well mixed too . drums are superb . maybe i would make the bass more prominent , not louder just bassier , just to give it some whack ! or maybe have a synth hitting a low bass note . Hey but Van this is superb . gets 5 from me , 
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09-24-2005, 04:59 PM
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I don't know man, this mix sounds pretty damn good. It grabbed me right away. Like the rhythm gtr especially. Very cool tune all over.
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09-24-2005, 07:46 PM
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This is great stuff BOB!! 
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09-24-2005, 08:22 PM
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This is killa, aweosme job Bob!! 
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09-24-2005, 08:58 PM
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Thanks for listening guys. And Art, I agree with you, the bass needs a bit more punch to it. I'll fix that when the finished product comes around.
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09-25-2005, 06:09 AM
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Very nice Bob ! Like this one alot ! 
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09-25-2005, 06:43 AM
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LOVE IT!!!! That funky beat is GREAT! ND strikes again 
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09-25-2005, 01:34 PM
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Hey !! When this kicked in thought Deep Purple straight away!!. That is not a critisism as i think all of us the 1st time we hear something will say "Hey that sounds like" etc etc etc......so its great !!! Its you !!!!!! 
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09-25-2005, 06:31 PM
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It seems that Art has started a trend. I've never been compared to Ian Gillan in my life and now it seems to be catching on, lol.
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"Don't you know who I am? I'm the Juggernaut bitch!"
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