Nice TJ, I like the tremelo with the wammy bar and you have nice leads and the tone is clean. The only thing that's holding you back a bit is the timing but it's an overall great tune. What are you using to record with dude?
I forgot to mention that the instrument used for this song was a new Ibanez Artcore AFS75T. If any of you ever wants to venture into jazz/rockabilly type music, you can pick up one of these bad boys for around $300. They're terrific.