im new here, with tunes to be reviewed, have a listen..!

hello everybody, im new here and so far i really like this place!
here are two links to two tunes i performred in a very unpopular event! they re both improvisations;
feedback and critics apreciated.

http://socs.qmsu.org/nowmusic/openmi...sation%201.mp3

http://socs.qmsu.org/nowmusic/openmi...sation%202.mp3

thanx in advance for taking the time to check the tunes out!
oussama.

[CanyonCarver]

The tone is nice but the guitar needs to come up more to the front in my opinion.

The improvisation is cool. I like the part where you get into the meat of it with the dirty sound. [img]images/smilies/icon_thumb.gif[/img]Good use of pinched harmonics too. It always brings out the soul in an improv.