So, I am by no means a professional musician. I've only taken two voice lessons, and once I get the money together, I want to take a few more. I write with two people; I usually provide lyrics and vocal melodies.
I would like some input on some of the stuff we through together.
"Snapped"
This one is only half of the song; there's a slow introduction, but you have to have the whole story in front of you, otherwise it would sound completely stupid instead of partly stupid. Basically, it's a rock opera spoof about cats.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=66R56NBM
"In the Ear"
From the same thing listed above; this one spoofs sappy ballads on metal concept albums.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=89XUK0JK
"July 31st"
This one is about my cousin, who committed suicide last year, and how everyone in my family seems to act as if they had no role in his death, even though they did not lift a finger to stop it, and acted as if he was an embarrassment until the day he hung himself.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=H3ZW8H9G
Okay, tear away.