Intro to a deep song

[ozzyman527]

I finally got a computer with a sound card, but I'm going to wait for the guitarport to record more because I can't get the distortion from my amp to my computer to sound anything like it actually should, but anyway, this is a clean sounding song, I wrote it while feeling sad and Angry.

No Name, just the intro for now, please give me opinions on how it sounds/what it needs.

Thank you in advance.