kinda heavy , but maybe you guys ll like.

i think maybe homeunit might dig it. we were talking about my bands demos at the vhforums. well here is the rough demos.the second one is pretty limp bizkity but were were just winging the lyrics and chourus when we were in the studio we just need lyrics to exbidite the song.
02_between_the_lines_demos.mp3

http://www.vhwalkathon.org/uploads/0..._joke_demo.mp3

ok , i think its working now.

[ericgtr]

I took care of it for you Rick, you did everything right but you had the code pasted twice [img]images/smilies/icon_wink.gif[/img]

Great stuff man! Definitely not too heavy for me, that freakin rocks dude. Thanks for the post.

[wip5150]

The guitar work was great - I liked the heavy feel and sound of it. Honestly though, I didn't care for the singing - too Limp Bizkity for me. But, WTF do I know?

Thanks for sharing - great work!

[Mondy]

The actual music was by no means too heavy for me. I really enjoyed it. The guitar was great !

The only thing is, that I cannot stand this kind of singing ! It makes my brain hurt ! Maybe I'm just getting old !

However, I can see how it fits in with the mood of the song, it's just a shame that I don't particularly take a liking to it.

But thanks for sharing the guitar work, some great work there !

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i understand. this is more of a project the singer asked us to help him on as a fun thing. i threw it up there for people to hear the music. i understand its not everyones fav style ,it just happens to be what im playing with at the moment. like i said the critisism has been very constructive and civil so thank you for listening. btw dont worry ill have some vh stuff up too latr.

[ericgtr]

Dude I really enjoyed this and understand it wasn't a perfectly mixed recording, most of our stuff here isn't either. Look forward to hearing the VH stuff dude [img]images/smilies/icon_thumb.gif[/img]

[homeunit]

sounds good Rick! A lot of good ideas there. Now all ya need is t rec and you'll be laughing...in a bone-crushing way!

hey bro gots some money saved up almost enough, so ill be asking you about recto and cab advice soon. [img]images/smilies/icon_thumb.gif[/img] anyway heres a few more demos we did. not everyones favorite style but aahhh well.
www.vhwalkathon.org/uploads/05_aint_no_joke_demo.mp3

[ericgtr]

I have to admit that the rap part really makes this song Rick, the guitar and melody line really work here. This is one that will have me humming it out all day.

[siN]

Eric, wip5150 and mondola just said it:

Nice guitar work, but I'm not too much into this singing work, but it reminded me of some band I saw back in the 80s at the Dynamo Open Air festival in the Netherlands.....

It is not too heavy. I can handle that.... LOL

At "between the lines" I noticed that the volume drops a bit around 3:10. And a bit earlier it looks like it is clipping ("never"...."never"....)....
For the rest the mix is oke in my ears.....


The second song has a good mix. Nothing to say about that. And like Eric said the song and the rap really combines excellent.
But my old and poor developped mind is not so rappy..... I liked the guitarwork, which was real solid underneath it. Good playing anyway.

jeeeziz keeerist... ya had me till the dude started "singing"...
but it is in line with some of the new rock out there.
Rock On

[Wolfman]

I'll go with what everybody else has said, Rick - great axe work, but not crazy about the vocals.

You've obviously explained that part though. [img]images/smilies/icon_wink.gif[/img]