when a young.................

[kaste81]

[img]images/smilies/jot.gif[/img]This is a song of mine:"When a young man cries".............hi [img]images/smilies/icon_jam.gif[/img] [img]images/smilies/afro.gif[/img] [img]images/smilies/icon_jam.gif[/img]

[ericgtr]

Nice. It sort of reminds me of Every Rose Has It's Thorn by Poison.

[kaste81]

I know that song.........but I was not a particular inspiration when i wrote my song [img]images/smilies/icon_thumb.gif[/img]

[Mondy]

Cool song. I just wish that the lead guitar was a bit more dominant in the mix.

But no complaints with the rest of the song. Very mellow chord progression, and the guitar playing is cool ! It begs for vocals though.

Great work !

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[CanyonCarver]

Nice work on this progression.
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