an original i did..

ok well here it is, it was a long time ago that i recorded this so i dont think my playing was so perfect then and my tone was crappy...but its good
and bass+drums are midi...mine too

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[ericgtr]

Thanks man, that has rush overtones to it. I will add the poll for this too. This is also in the instructions [img]images/smilies/icon_thumb.gif[/img]

<FORM METHOD=POST ACTION="http://www.vhfans.com/boards/dopoll.php"><INPUT TYPE=HIDDEN NAME="pollname" VALUE="1055813223ericgtr">


Please rate this MP3 - 5 being the best
<input type="radio" name="option" value="1" />5
<input type="radio" name="option" value="2" />4
<input type="radio" name="option" value="3" />3
<input type="radio" name="option" value="4" />2
<input type="radio" name="option" value="5" />1
<INPUT TYPE=Submit NAME=Submit VALUE="Submit vote" class="buttons"></form>

[CanyonCarver]

Thanks for joining and submitting your song!
I like your phrasing. Tone is acceptable, don't beat yourself up over that. The music still doest the talking.

[Wolfman]

Good to have ya here, man - that's a nice track for sure. Only thing I could see it benefitting from is a remix with the guitar upfornt a little more. [img]images/smilies/icon_cool.gif[/img]

[Mondy]

Great playing and great phrasing and song structure there.

So much going on there, that it would take me a while to get into it, but it's definitely a great tune.

Welcome aboard !

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[wip5150]

Nice playing and phrasing on the song. Good work!

thnx for the comments very flattering...but dude u guyz should vote more..i mean i got 40+ come here till not and only like 5 votes or so...

this is actually more of the short version of the song...i'm planning on taking it on and making it a respectable prog. metal song...just when i have the time to start composing i'll be doing a lot of stuff

[siN]

Thanks for posting the song. You did some interesting things there.