I like the delay on the guitar, but I'm not so thrilled with the tone, which I find a bit to buzzy or “electronic” for my taste. I don't know if this makes any sense to you, and I hope you don't mind the flaming because I'd rather write somewhat constructive criticism than kiss people's derriere.
On the other hand the playing in itself is very soulful and skilledl! You sound like you're in charge the whole song.
Also the passage toward the end with the wah pedal
is very timely and gives extra tension.
Too bad the end is missing. I don't knopw if you're aware of it...
Great work and thank you for submitting.