March Contest Entry Original Ballad My Soul Is Bleeding (Krimson & RobertVanHagar)

krimson · 03-03-2005, 06:58 PM

Here is Mine and RobertVanHagar's Entry for the March Contest.

http://www.guitars101.com/forums/attachm...chmentid=10790

TopJimmy78 · 03-04-2005, 07:52 AM

Man guys this is awesome, killa job, awesome entry!!!

rain · 03-04-2005, 07:52 AM

This was put together amazing..The lryics are very deep and touching...The vocals are very moving indeed..Solo was awesome..Way to go guys..This was very enjoyable!

Goport · 03-04-2005, 11:41 PM

very cool indeed. excellent vox and playing. good arrangement too - sounds a little Bon Jovi-ish to me (especially the key change)

krimson · 03-05-2005, 08:39 AM

Thanks Goport. I am a huge Bon Jovi fan. I actually named my son Jonathan Richie after Jon and Richie. I just call him Richie and pray that he becomes a musician as well. I also own two Richie Sambora Kramers that probably have the most sentimental value in my collection.

Personally, I don't really hear much of an influence, except maybe in the keychange, but to me that is a nice compliment.

Beka4MikE · 03-05-2005, 11:55 AM

very good song...quite well done....I too at the beginning of the song felt a little bon jovi influence! Great job you two!

Black Star · 03-05-2005, 01:39 PM

that kicked ass! very nice production to!

nandk · 03-06-2005, 04:44 PM

Good job, S

ounds great!

**jimihendrix** · 03-06-2005, 04:52 PM

all right...where have ya been hiding RobertVanHagar...???...he hasn't posted any thing for a while...robert...if you can read this...are you being treated well...???...there's a lineup of people wanting to collaborate with you...don't worry...we're negotiating your release as you read this...awesome tune by the way...

**RobertVanHagar** · 03-07-2005, 04:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jimihendrix

all right...where have ya been hiding RobertVanHagar...???...he hasn't posted any thing for a while...robert...if you can read this...are you being treated well...???...there's a lineup of people wanting to collaborate with you...don't worry...we're negotiating your release as you read this...awesome tune by the way...

Thank you Jimi for the compliment on the song. Glad you like it. Now in regards to my whereabouts, I've been busy w/school, my business, getting my computer back on track, and now a happy owner of another beautiful husky: Holly. She's around 10 or 11 years old.
But anyhow, I'm sorry guys for not getting back to some of you, but I'm gonna start getting back w/the beat of things.
Going back to My Soul Is Bleeding, this is one of my all time favorite tunes. Keith just plastered on canvas a very beautiful, heartfelt, masterpiece. I just added the garnishes.

Goport · 03-11-2005, 01:00 PM

just like to say I have been listening to this all week while working away - it is a fucking great track!

krimson · 03-11-2005, 02:03 PM

Thanks Goport I am glad u like. I wrote this song during a time when my wife and I were not getting along. The lyrics themselves pretty much describe exactly how I felt during that time. Writting it was very healing, it allowed me a way to convey and release my feelings at the time.

**bones_19l** · 03-11-2005, 10:28 PM

Great piano. It sounds full. a real grand? Good sample if not. Had a little trouble with the bass mix-wise, but, I have no room to talk. Very touching song. I bet chicks love it. Was that a Les Paul? Nice Key change also.
peace.

krimson · 03-12-2005, 09:26 AM

For this song we used the Following:

Software:
EMagic Logic 5 Software (to record all the tracks)

Guitars:
PRS CE 24 (Clean and Dirty Rhythm Guitars)
Kramer Sambora (Solo)

Amp:
Peavey 5150 halfstack (Clean and Dirty)

Keyboard:
Roland EM Series? (Not really sure of model, used for Drum tracks, strings, bass, and a few other tones)

Mic:
Crown CM312A headset (Used to mic up the amplifier and for all vocal tracks)

snakehead · 03-13-2005, 10:03 AM

Love this!!!

Great vox

definitely should be a strong contender to win!!

Thanks Goport

Wowsers Mr.

I Used a PRS CE24