Dream Theater’s ** Through my words & Fatal tragedy** Lafronde & Solitude - Guitars101

solitude · 11-18-2006, 06:33 PM

The continuing scenes from LP [Metropolis part II: Scene from a memory].
Based on
Scene three: I. Through my words
II. Fatal tragedy
Lafronde created ‘ Fatal tragedy’ backing track.
Me on vox, ‘Though my words’ backing track & final mix.
We hope you like it!

http://www.linkmyfile.com/v/930674/S...agedy.mp3.html

Holy Thunder · 11-18-2006, 09:24 PM

Sounds great!! Solitude!!

Sound really close to Labree excelent job!!

Vary nice production really enjoyed this alot thanks for sharing.

solitude · 11-19-2006, 05:52 AM

Thank you very much my friend.I really appreciate your words

Beka4MikE · 11-19-2006, 08:56 AM

Hey this is one of my favorite songs and it sounds great!!!

solitude · 11-19-2006, 07:31 PM

Thx Mike For Listening & Comment

**CanyonCarver** · 11-20-2006, 08:03 AM

Your voice is great in the intro and in the rest of the song. You have a good clean voice. Keep working it.

Criticism: I feel that the harmonized voice (the lower one) could go down a smidge in some parts. I feel it should support your main singing, not compete with it. Also watch your pitch. It sounds as if when you push the voice, it's more in pitch than when you sing softly. I don't know much about singing, but I seem to have spotted that in parts.

Who is doing the guitar parts? Is it Lafronde too?
If it's the case, top-grade work on his end.

solitude · 11-20-2006, 07:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CanyonCarver

Your voice is great in the intro and in the rest of the song. You have a good clean voice. Keep working it.

Criticism: I feel that the harmonized voice (the lower one) could go down a smidge in some parts. I feel it should support your main singing, not compete with it. Also watch your pitch. It sounds as if when you push the voice, it's more in pitch than when you sing softly. I don't know much about singing, but I seem to have spotted that in parts.

Who is doing the guitar parts? Is it Lafronde too?
If it's the case, top-grade work on his end.

Thx very much CC for listening & valuable criticism.I'm learning how to mix & this help me improve my works big THX

Lafronde did all instruments & also GTs this guy is amazing.