01-23-2005, 07:57 PM
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: Philadelphia
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Don't Wake Me Up
Here's the words for the contest entry by Wiz and myself (insert shameless plug here http://www.guitars101.com/forums/showthread.php?t=27963 LOL)
Don't Wake Me Up
(Bob Morrison/Don Moore)
Too many lights, my head is spinning round
Where am I tonight? Far away or homeward bound?
I’m taking flight, like dancing with no sound
It’s paradise, lost and found
Don’t wake me up, Just let me be
It’s no one’s fault, Just fantasy
Inside my head, you’re here with me
Inside my heart, it’s just fantasy
Deep inside, I never let you go
Too proud to fight, I never let it show
But every night, you’re still here with me
And I do what’s right, in my fantasy
Every night, I see you walk away
This foolish pride, it haunts me every day
Don’t wake me up, Just let me be
It’s no one’s fault, Just fantasy
Deep inside, I never let you go
Too proud to fight, I never let it show
But every night, you’re still here with me
And I do what’s right, in my fantasy
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"It was John Lennon who said "Life is what happens while you're making plans." Of course he also said "I am the Eggman, I am the Walrus" so I don't know WHAT to believe. "
"Don't you know who I am? I'm the Juggernaut bitch!"
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01-24-2005, 11:34 AM
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excess to requirements
Join Date: Jul 2004
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Excellent mate - I like the pivot line at the end of each verse.
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01-24-2005, 01:28 PM
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~Free Will~
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Lost in your eyes...
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Very deep and touching...
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01-24-2005, 02:31 PM
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Goddess of 101
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Roaming the streets in the world in my head
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Loved it sweetie. This will be printed and saved. Absolutely loved it. 
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"Sometimes you meet someone and things go great, you have a great relationship. Other times you meet someone and things don't go so great, I call that a realtionshit." Dane Cook
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01-24-2005, 07:35 PM
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Join Date: May 2004
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Originally Posted by DLYNN
Loved it sweetie. This will be printed and saved. Absolutely loved it. |
You keep calling me sweetie and I'll write you a copy out myself 
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"It was John Lennon who said "Life is what happens while you're making plans." Of course he also said "I am the Eggman, I am the Walrus" so I don't know WHAT to believe. "
"Don't you know who I am? I'm the Juggernaut bitch!"
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01-25-2005, 05:30 PM
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Goddess of 101
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Roaming the streets in the world in my head
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Originally Posted by VanMan2000
You keep calling me sweetie and I'll write you a copy out myself |
Really? Hmmmmm Well sweetie, You know you are my sweetie. You're my sweet, sexy, man. So sweetie, how about a personalized signed copy. To: Danielle From Your Sweetie. lol But seriously.....  . lol
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"Sometimes you meet someone and things go great, you have a great relationship. Other times you meet someone and things don't go so great, I call that a realtionshit." Dane Cook
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