02-14-2005, 07:10 PM
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Metal head
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Quebec, Canada
Posts: 1,058
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Exercice
Hi
An exercice of words and (lost) love...hope you like it. It's form over content, i agree. It's done to have music on top.
Happy St-Valentine's Day everyone
Don’t let me go
Clouds covering mind and soul
At the edge of darkness, there is you,
Sweet, sad eyes, looking through the mirror
Searching for the answers buried in your soul
Dawn rising over us
Long embrace, tender touch
the shortest distance to your heart,
and still the pain draws you away
Don’t let me go, don’t let it be
Touch me once, and make me free
Hang on to the love
Hang on to the dreams
Hang on to the heart
Spread your wings.
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02-15-2005, 08:59 AM
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Metal head
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Quebec, Canada
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Any comments??
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02-15-2005, 09:31 AM
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Arena Artist
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Chicago Ill.
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Very cool...I had a tune in my head while reading it and I think thats what makes good lyrics?
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02-15-2005, 01:24 PM
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Metal head
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Quebec, Canada
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Thanks! i did it thinking about the possibility of getting some melody on top...maybe some metal or some hard rock.
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02-15-2005, 11:02 PM
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excess to requirements
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Portsmouth, England
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Very impressive Sister. I would like to hear this set to music. Oh, and I better zip up 
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02-16-2005, 06:01 PM
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Metal head
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Quebec, Canada
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LOL!!!! Yeah man!!! LOL!!!!! 
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Originally Posted by Goport
Very impressive Sister. I would like to hear this set to music. Oh, and I better zip up |
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02-16-2005, 06:20 PM
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~Free Will~
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Lost in your eyes...
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Very nice indeed Sister..
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02-16-2005, 06:28 PM
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PinkyAppleBuns
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Detroit, MI
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This was killa Sister, great job!!
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Shipwreck the sun, I'm on your side
An army of one, onward we'll ride
And whisper your songs, birds to the air
We'll bury all of our burdens there--Audioslave "Heaven's Dead"
That shit right here is soo good, it will make you go home and slap yo momma--Mandy Love on some southern cooking
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02-18-2005, 02:03 PM
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Metal head
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Quebec, Canada
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Thanks Rain and TopJimmy...now..can i have some cornbread???  You know i did it only to get some cornbread and jambalaya, guys....  |
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02-18-2005, 02:05 PM
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Goddess of 101
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Roaming the streets in the world in my head
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Very nice Sister, enjoyed it!!
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02-18-2005, 02:24 PM
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~Free Will~
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Lost in your eyes...
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That is worth all the cornbread in the world hun....
2 cups of cornmeal
1 and 1/3 cup of milk or buttermilk
1/4 cup of vegetable oil
1 egg
1/3 cup of suger or how much you want sweet
mix this all together
heat oven to 450
spray iron skillet with non stick spray
pour mixture in pan
bake for about 20 to 25 or until golden brown
There ya go sister..hehe...southern sweetbread
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Thanks Rain and TopJimmy...now..can i have some cornbread??? You know i did it only to get some cornbread and jambalaya, guys.... |
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