how's this song sound???

[rockula'sangel]

The taste of your kiss, i'll never get over, the feel of your curly brown hair across my cheek, and your arms wrapped around me, holding me, and telling me you love me w/out the slightest sound.

Your soft brown eyes , and your crooked smile, i will never forget, and the way you looked at me, with those sweet unforgetable eyes, will never leave my memory, the way you said i love you baby, keeps ringing in my ears like a ghost saying it over and over again.

your with me every night when i sleep, and every stranger i see your face, i miss you, i need you, i need you here telling me you love me, baby i cant breathe without you.

i pass you in the hall, i see your unforgetable hazel eyes, and i fall apart, my legs buckle as i stumble to get up, you ask if im ok, i say yes, but id be better with your arms around me, like they used to be.

thats all i have so far, wht do u think?