10-19-2005, 10:38 PM
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Lady
I worked so hard all day
At the smackdown cafe
Come back to my girl at the ol homestead
Get your biscuits in the oven
and get those buns in bed.
We had a small fight
That fateful night so
so I told her this so she could see..
Since i ain't over you, why won't you come down under me?
She didn't like it
Left me all alone
So i reflected after havin a beer
Lady I'm so miserable... it's like having you here.
She had yellow teethe but a pure heart
inside my soul was stolen
I ponder what to do
Kill myself or go bowling?
Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!! Some good Poetry returns to the site.
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10-20-2005, 10:07 AM
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10-20-2005, 09:15 PM
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BRAVO TIME
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if i gave you 50 cents for your whole catolog of poetry "champ", you'd still owe me change 
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10-21-2005, 05:27 AM
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excess to requirements
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It is tacky ... but this is actually really funny and pretty good. I love the last line 
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10-21-2005, 06:46 AM
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Originally Posted by Goport
It is tacky ... but this is actually really funny and pretty good. I love the last line |
I knew somone would apreciate it.
Flair don't make me rock bottom you!!
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10-24-2005, 08:13 AM
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bump of gr8ness.
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10-31-2005, 01:55 PM
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Another Broke Guitarist
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Originally Posted by the rock
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11-04-2005, 08:20 PM
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The People's poetry champ????? Chump maybe....champ....uh, no....Sorry but you are sadly mistaken.....your poetry doesn't even come close to comparing to the likes of cro and billandgitana...But I think you know that, that must be why you babble incoherently every few days....and what even makes it worse....you don't even have your own gimmick....you have to use a gimmick of a has been wrestler. Sad....very sad.....come up with something original, and drop the whole "The Rock Says...." crap....
And a side note "Rock", good poetry has been here, and I know for a fact it ain't comin' from you....
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11-06-2005, 01:15 AM
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hahaha dude if you call this a poem ill give you a cent for it.but if its a joke man id give you a dollar.
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11-06-2005, 08:04 AM
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Playin The Blues
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Originally Posted by jlg6184
The People's poetry champ????? Chump maybe....champ....uh, no....Sorry but you are sadly mistaken.....your poetry doesn't even come close to comparing to the likes of cro and billandgitana...But I think you know that, that must be why you babble incoherently every few days....and what even makes it worse....you don't even have your own gimmick....you have to use a gimmick of a has been wrestler. Sad....very sad.....come up with something original, and drop the whole "The Rock Says...." crap....
And a side note "Rock", good poetry has been here, and I know for a fact it ain't comin' from you....
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hahaha lighten up jl .... rocks just havin a lil fun and makin us laff  always good to have a laff Actually pretty creative Rock my friend !!! |
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11-06-2005, 08:42 AM
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I was simply informing "the Rock" that his gimmick is old and tired....I really don't see why his "poetry" is liked and defended by many....He likes to think he is great, when he isn't....I could understand humorous poems....everyone needs humor, but I feel he has absolutely no originality. If he wants to be humorous, why not come up with something original?
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11-06-2005, 09:07 AM
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guys relax rock just acts this way to make us laugh i hope any ways let the guy be in fact the dude putting some originality in the rock gimmik thing i dont think its bad atleast he makes us laugh.
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11-06-2005, 08:28 PM
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Originally Posted by zeppy
hahaha lighten up jl .... rocks just havin a lil fun and makin us laff always good to have a laff Actually pretty creative Rock my friend !!! |
Thanx zeppy it's all in good fun.
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11-06-2005, 08:30 PM
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Originally Posted by pranavpahwa
guys relax rock just acts this way to make us laugh i hope any ways let the guy be in fact the dude putting some originality in the rock gimmik thing i dont think its bad atleast he makes us laugh.
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It's just comic relief, i mean nothing at all against cro, or the others but i mean, doom and gloom shit gets tiring to read to.
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11-06-2005, 08:36 PM
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for jig
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Originally Posted by jlg6184
I was simply informing "the Rock" that his gimmick is old and tired....I really don't see why his "poetry" is liked and defended by many....He likes to think he is great, when he isn't....I could understand humorous poems....everyone needs humor, but I feel he has absolutely no originality. If he wants to be humorous, why not come up with something original?
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Thank you jig...
This one is for you....
Ohh jig thinks I am a bore
I thinks he's just a little sore
one with an inept mind
So rips on the rock
How jig you must be blind
Jig had a girl
She said "i like what you got"
But her mind quickly changed
When she read the brilliance of the rock.
Now jib get some vasoline cause you seem too be quite tight in the arse.
Music and poetry should have fun in it, if you like the doom shit it won't come from myself.
If ya smeeeeeeeeelleleleleleleeleelllll what the rock is cookin!!!!!
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