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Old 11-12-2008, 08:44 PM   #1
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My Song - Scene Queen. Thoughts?


Hey, this is a song that i wrote, it is meant to be reminiscent directly of Motley Crue...
Just like to hear your thoughts about it, thanks.


Scene Queen

Deuces Are Wild

(Tim, Brodie)

1st Verse (Spoken):

I just don't wanna remember those days,

The days when we walked hand in hand,

But you left me, you walked away,

But not before you etched your mark

Set in stone, not clay.


Bridge to Chorus:


[How's this for a spark?]

Under your hairspray and your burgundy lips,

Beneath the mini skirts and skanky hips,

There you are, queen of the strip.

You'd done it all before you were sixteen.
Chorus:

You're the scene queen of a small, lonesome town,

Fifteen, with your feet off the ground,

Too fast for love, you're eyes kept a rollin'

But when it all fell from above, you couldn't stop a fallin'

2nd Verse:


You said we'd be man and wife.

But you cut me up with your butcher's knife,

And threw me out to sea,

You ruined my life (Can't YOU see?)



Bridge To Chorus (2):


I'd given you everything, you left at the worst of times,

Without apologizing, still not punished for the worst of your crimes,

But before the bells chimed, time was up honey, you were over me,

It must be gene babe, you're just a tad obscene,

Chorus:

You're the scene queen of a fuckin' lonesome town,

Fifteen, with your feet off the ground,

Too fast for love, you're eyes kept a rollin'

But when it all fell from above, you didn't stop bawlin'


3rd Verse:

It's a rule of thumb,

You say what you think,

And you think before it's said. <I was gonna be the one to get the daily bread)

But when you're lying through your teeth,

The only one you'll hurt is me.


Bridge To Chorus (3):

Different bed every night, not often without a fight,

Out on the town, patrolling the strip,

I'm over it babe, bite your lip,

For once you're in between, done everything before you were sixteen.

Chorus:

You're the scene queen of a fuckin' lonesome town,

Fifteen, with your feet off the ground,

Too young for love, babe, you were found, my eyes didn't stop rolling

But when you dropped your velvet glove, you didn't stop the howlin'


4th Verse:

You kicked like a jack, stung like a bee,

But once I looked back for another bout ,

You left your needle in me, <like a fucking heroin junkie, once it goes in, doesn't come out, no matter how much I scream and shout>

God knows, you're gonna go on a killing spree

Chorus:

You're the scene queen of a fuckin' terrible town,

Fifteen, with your feet off the ground,

Too fast for love, you're eyes kept a rollin'

But when it all fell from above, you couldn't stop a fallin'


Outro (Fade Out):

You left me wounded and broken,

You're like a scar,

Every night, someone else's car.

Like a broken toy, weighed down by your urge to enjoy


You're fifteen sugar, done it all before,

Not long before you score,

But babe, I'm over this shit, so bite your lip.
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Old 02-12-2009, 10:15 AM   #2
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My opinion: I love it. The chorus is awesome and the last three lines in the outro were just perfect.
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Old 09-27-2009, 05:55 PM   #3
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Hi.
Are you a writer and a composer?
I love the lyrics.
It really made sense to me.

I'm glad to see more of your writings posted here.

By the way, thanks for sharing.
God has given you the talent, so share it and use it for HIS glory.
God Bless.
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Nice lyrics dude.
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