please critique my song(i'll be there for you)

[rockula'sangel]

i wrote this song when my baby's house got destroyed by a tornado, he's lucky he's alive, and i'm grateful for every second i hear his voice.

Baby you’ve had a tough way to go, you haven’t slept in weeks and you’re all stressed out from all the bad luck you’ve had to live through and deal with, but baby I want you to know:

I’ll be there for you, no matter what the cost,
I’ll be there for you no matter what I have to do or who I have to go through,
Baby I’ll always be there for you

Baby you can rely on me, you can cry on me,
You’ve given me happiness, you’ve given me your love, you’ve given me your whole world, now the least I can do is be there for you when your luck is down, and your world has crashed to the ground, so ba-a-b-ay-yay,
Just know that:

I’ll be there for you, no matter what the cost,
I’ll be there for you no matter what I have to do or who I have to go through,
Baby I’m always gonna be there for you!

Every second we’re apart, every minute that you’re gone I miss you,
But when you come home and I see your face, when you call and tell me that you love me, the sun shines in my cloudy skies and it’s like we’ve never been apart, I wanna thank you for all the love you give me, you make me feel so alive,

Come here now baby, you’ve had a hard day and you’ve had an even rougher time, so come here honey, and let me love all the bad away, cuz I love you and I want you to know:

I’ll be there for you no matter what the cost,
I’ll be there for you no matter what I have to do,
No matter what mountain I have to climb, there’s no river I wont cross, and there’s no distance I wont walk, Just to get to you and be with you,
Baby I’ll show you, I’m always gonna be there for you!

Honey I promise you, I’m gonna be there for you!

Always…