12-29-2004, 10:33 AM
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Toastmaster General
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Philadelphia
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Surrounded
Here's the words to one of the originals that Wiz and I wrote. It's a peppy little pop ditty called Surrounded, lol.
(Bob Morrison/Don Moore)
I am nothing, I am everything
Can you feel me all around you?
I am watching, I am waiting
Will you let my light surround you?
Can you see me, falling freely?
Reach out your hand to guide me
Pull me under, lift me over
It's your love that blinds me
It's your eyes, those tender sighs
That keep my heart surrounded
Giving life but cold as ice
You keep my heart surrounded
I see shadows past my window
Is that you, right beside me?
Can you hear me, love you dearly
But you hurt me so precisely
Live without you, never doubt you
Could you ever let me go?
We both need it so we feed it
And I know why
All this time, the tears we've cried
Can this be what we feel?
We're trading pain, but what remains
It can't be real
Start with nothing, left with nothing
Don't remember, I can't forget
The time we're spending, just pretending
Use me up until there's nothing left
Tender secrets left within us
Don't you ever tell a soul
Hurt me deeply, so completely
And no one will ever know I'm Surrounded
(©2004)
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"Don't you know who I am? I'm the Juggernaut bitch!"
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12-29-2004, 10:45 AM
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~Free Will~
Join Date: Apr 2004
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wow...this totally touched me so...brought tears to my eyes...
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12-29-2004, 10:47 AM
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I wanted to call this one "Gosh I Really Love Puppies" but Wiz insisted we make it a little more dark and brooding. Thanks for the kind words Rain.
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"It was John Lennon who said "Life is what happens while you're making plans." Of course he also said "I am the Eggman, I am the Walrus" so I don't know WHAT to believe. "
"Don't you know who I am? I'm the Juggernaut bitch!"
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12-29-2004, 11:43 AM
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PinkyAppleBuns
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Detroit, MI
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This was awesoem, killa job guys!!
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Shipwreck the sun, I'm on your side
An army of one, onward we'll ride
And whisper your songs, birds to the air
We'll bury all of our burdens there--Audioslave "Heaven's Dead"
That shit right here is soo good, it will make you go home and slap yo momma--Mandy Love on some southern cooking
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12-29-2004, 07:11 PM
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Cult Of Personality
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Philadelphia
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Yea man that was pretty damn cool. 
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Far as I’m concerned, Eddie’s the complete package. Technique aside, his rhythm playing, feel, songwriting, tone, riffs, leads, man, it’s all there. It’s like the best-tasting beer you ever drank in your life! ~Zakk Wylde
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12-29-2004, 09:31 PM
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Toastmaster General
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Thanks guys.
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"It was John Lennon who said "Life is what happens while you're making plans." Of course he also said "I am the Eggman, I am the Walrus" so I don't know WHAT to believe. "
"Don't you know who I am? I'm the Juggernaut bitch!"
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01-22-2005, 04:28 PM
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Rebel XTi
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: South Carolina
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Van nice flow there bud! Thats why your the leader buddy!!!
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01-22-2005, 04:36 PM
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Goddess of 101
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Roaming the streets in the world in my head
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Bob, great lyrics. Your way of words is always amazing.
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