03-11-2006, 11:19 PM
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Famous Artist
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Milo,Maine
Posts: 291
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The Beat Of MY Heart
I wrote this with a friend of mine. It's about her crush and how she wants him and such. I'm going back into the lighter love song pop ways. lol.. Maybe, I dunno.. So here it is, enjoy!
The Beat Of My Heart
Feel the beat of my heart,
Listen to the rhythm of my breathing,
Taste the song resting on my lips,
As we make our music together.
How can you say, this ain't magic?
Days turn to night,
and summer changes to fall,
it's been so long since I've seen your face,
it's been close to never,
since I last held you so tightly in my arms,
the last time that I loved you,
was when the snow coverd my backyard,
and we were sipping hot coccoa,
and snuggling so close,
Feel the beat of my heart,
Listen to the rhythm of my breathing,
Taste the song resting on my lips,
As we make our music together.
How can you say, this ain't magic?
the love that I had for you imprisons my heart,
and you run wild through out my mind,
I'm just another inmate that's imprisoned in your heart,
just another young girl just looking for a little love,
the magic of your touch,
makes me shrudder so tightly,
the taste of your lips makes me want you even more,
I listen to your voice so tentively,
and I can still hear it in my head,
I still remember the days that we spent together,
on that snowy evening cuddling so close,
what was it that drawn me to you,
was it your eyes? or was it your hair,
the way that you touched me,
or the way that you made me feel so safe and so loved,
the way you held me and let me listen to your heartbeat all day long,
Feel the beat of my heart,
Listen to the rhythm of my breathing,
Taste the song resting on my lips,
As we make our music together.
How can you say, this ain't magic
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03-12-2006, 05:14 AM
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Another Broke Guitarist
Join Date: Jul 2005
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nice one Cro...definitly different vibe from some of your other works.. 
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03-13-2006, 04:30 AM
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Famous Artist
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Location: Milo,Maine
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Songs like this are great, because it shows everybody that I'm not always a depressed maniac. I maybe a little rough around the edges at time, but inside I'm a furry little kitten. Or something like that. Writing this just showed myself I don't ALWAYS have to write about death,dieing,suicide and satan. But thanks for the comment. =)
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11-24-2006, 12:43 AM
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Famous Artist
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To each their own.
It makes me think that it was written by a little girl?
That may be a good thing since they are the ones who buy the bulk of the music being sold.
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11-24-2006, 08:50 PM
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Famous Artist
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Milo,Maine
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Originally Posted by Badams
To each their own.
It makes me think that it was written by a little girl?
That may be a good thing since they are the ones who buy the bulk of the music being sold.
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I was trying to do it from a presepctive of a young girl... lol
I didn't think this one was any good anyways.
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