TRUST (lamp shaped lyric) - Guitars101

**bones_19l** · 04-09-2005, 11:50 PM

This lyric, I chose to use a link because I'm not sure if this message window keeps the font exactly as written, and this lyric is one of my favorites because it also is in the shape of a lamp.

I find that lamp shaped lyrics are far and few in between. This is the only one I've written that is lamp shaped. I titled it "TRUST".
You can view it in it's original form at the following link:

http://www.missinglenk.com/bones/TRUST.DOC

**wigrocks** · 04-15-2005, 06:32 AM

I really found myself relating to this... From a different time in life, but we don't forget times like that. Specifically I really enjoyed...

"Keeps are the spoils , if you turn your back,
And replace doubt with anger.
Cornered by proxy, they walk as shadows
Away from the turmoil left to rot in your path,"

Got a chill after reading that, relating it to one of my own experiences. Terrific stuff... Hope to see more soon.

Goport · 04-20-2005, 01:20 AM

This is impressive stuff bones. I like the feeling of frustration in the opening lines especially.

andrewtheshreddr · 04-23-2005, 02:56 AM

very strong lyrics.... very very good