We Die As Brothers

[Cro]

I wrote this the other night, kinda inspired by "A Toute Le Monde" by Megadeth. IT's not a song nor a poem just for emotional words. If someone would like to help me write a song or something let me know.

Tears upon my face;
as I cradle deaths sweet embrace;
As I lay dying here now ;
I know that we die as one ;
We die as distilled soliders;
Our lives slowly slip away into the black abyss;
We die as brothers;
We die as heroes;

[Goport]

Very cool Cro. You do seem to be obsessed with morbid stuff but you do it well.

BTW it is dying not dieing

[Lorenz]

cool stuff man

[Cro]

Originally Posted by Goport

Very cool Cro. You do seem to be obsessed with morbid stuff but you do it well.

BTW it is dying not dieing

Thanks for the correction, Goport. I typed it up quick.
Thanks for the compliment I am morbid, I can't help it!! :P
Anyways, this might be the last pieace I do in a while. Maybe after I come back from my dad's wedding in june, I may have some new material, thanks for all your suport, Goport.

[slowhand19]

"Tears upon my face;
as I cradle deaths sweet embrace;
As I lay dying here now ;
I know that we die as one ;
We die as distilled soliders;
Our lives slowly slip away into the black abyss;
We die as brothers;
We die as heroes;"

that is a great poem/lyrics, i really like the imagery in it

how about this:

i feel the tears upon my face
as i lay here dying now
to cradle death's embrace
is all that i know how
we die as one, a soul conjoined
nought remains of this body and life
speak your last words into my mind
peace will soon replace our strife
distilled soldiers in the midst of it all
we die as only we know
the black abyss will draw its pall
but stronger the wind from heaven will blow
we die as brothers, a feat so small
but as heroes we stand and as heroes we fall


copyright by me 6/6/06 (seriously)