12-23-2004, 05:03 AM
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What planet are you on ? mondola
What planet are you on now baby,
Is it Mercury or Venus ?
If I could reach into your world
Maybe there'd be something between us ?
Do you surf the rings of Saturn ?
Do you constellate the stars ?
Or are you too far out on Pluto baby
To meet me here on Mars ?
Last edited by mondola; 02-13-2005 at 01:44 PM.
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12-23-2004, 05:10 AM
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hey thats pretty cool mate. I am just glad you didn't go looking for a rhyme for uranus 
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12-23-2004, 05:31 AM
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Well, I had another line with Orange, and amother with Sax-o-mo-phone in it. So I ended up ditching it and just sticking with the chorus !!!
Thanx for taking the time to read it...
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01-21-2005, 02:28 PM
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err, can someone tell me why people are deleting perfectly good lyrics? Mondola - I liked this and the construction of it. My lyrics are far less focused and you did a good job here and kept to your subject matter. I respect that. repost.
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"All right, but apart from the sanitation, the medicine, education, wine, public order, irrigation, roads, a fresh water system, and public health, what have the Romans ever done for us?"
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02-13-2005, 01:32 PM
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Sorry, you know how fucking touchy I am man, and I take things so bloody personally !
I just pulled it because I thought it was shit !!!
I will repost then
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02-15-2005, 05:10 AM
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I really like this! I can imagine it being a spoken word passage in a Hendrix/early Bowie wierd out moment. Thanks for putting it up. 
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"All right, but apart from the sanitation, the medicine, education, wine, public order, irrigation, roads, a fresh water system, and public health, what have the Romans ever done for us?"
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