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I really like this. A very good balance between retrospective emotions and the potential of the future.
But ...
"And a bump has turned to aching
The night I save for waiting
Talking in my sleep"
Now that is *Quality* mate! The stuff I wrote in my early twenties was anything but good
But ...
"And a bump has turned to aching
The night I save for waiting
Talking in my sleep"
Now that is *Quality* mate! The stuff I wrote in my early twenties was anything but good
