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~Free Will~
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Glowing Red moon light...
Wondering in the night...
Evil lurks behind me...
Scared I turn to see...

Forest filled with cries...
Still this creature hides...
On my fear it feeds...
I am what it seeks...

I try to escape...
As it takes shape...
A cold black dust...
I feel its lust...

This evil still reeks...
My domination it seeks...
Temptation I cant fight...
So filled with fright...

Possesion over takes me...
To weak to break free...
He sinks his teeth in...
Only to devour my skin...

I tried to escape...
Only for my sake...
Now he has my trust...
This evil dark lust...

~Mandy~
 

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WOW!!! This is soo awesome my Mandy Love, very dark, man soo killa, it soo builds and then ends soo aweosme, killa job, I am soo proud of you just aweosme!! :thumb: :thumb:
 

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~Free Will~
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Thank you Jimmy....Thank you Matt...I'm glad you guys enjoyed this...:twisted:
 

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Thanks Ry....Yes it would sound cool on some dark heavy music...:icon_thum
 

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Thanks Wiggy...Thanks Joey....If you would like..feel free to put these lyrics to music...I soo enjoy hearing what peeps come up with..I do see a type o negative feel to these lyrics..So if you guys can put some music and find someone to sing the lyrics....I would LOVE IT!!!!;)
 

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Would you mind if I sent a copy of something I've got so far in an e-mail to you first? I'm sort of green, so maybe you could check it out first, see if it's got the right stuff. Also, I only have it saved right now as .wma.
 
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