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~Free Will~
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She sits in a dark corner...
Bottle of whiskey in her hand...
This life has nothing for her...
Like an hour glass with no sand...

A sky with no clouds...
The sea without water...
Hearing with no sounds...
Is this drink the last for her?...

Tears fall as she drinks...
Her memories start fading...
With no energy to blink...
As her soul starts bleeding...

Will she awake to a sunrise?...
Can she free her soul?...
Her body slumps with a sigh...
As she starts to loose control...

The bottle falls to the floor...
She looks up into the dark...
A light appears at the door...
She hears the angel's harp...

The angel reaches out to her...
Takes her hand and starts to fly...
To a place thats always brighter...
Where her soul will never die...

I wrote this one last night before I went to beddy bye...I hope you all read it..

Mandy
 

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Wow Mandy these are soo very powerful, and the pic soo sets it off great, ty soo much for sharing these with us :icon_thum
 

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blimey mandy - this is a bit dark for you. It is very good though and well written :thumb:
 

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BRAVO TIME
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that's awesome stuff, beautiful, and just real in tune and paints a picture, almost like you knew the person.
 

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I read this a few minutes ago and then I just reread it. Damn you but you nearly made me misty...you made me remember someone who checked out way too soon a long time ago :(

It's a talent to actually write words down that can evoke emotions. This is actually really good. Hell, Rain, I have a short attention span and I read it twice :lol:

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~Free Will~
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stingx said:
I read this a few minutes ago and then I just reread it. Damn you but you nearly made me misty...you made me remember someone who checked out way too soon a long time ago :(

It's a talent to actually write words down that can evoke emotions. This is actually really good. Hell, Rain, I have a short attention span and I read it twice :lol:

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...Stingy i'm sorry it brought back a emotional time hun...I do appreciate you coming and reading this...I so doo...Thank you sweety:icon_thum
 

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Great job my dear. I really liked this. :thumb:
 
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