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~Free Will~
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When i was away for a few weeks from here...I decided to try to write some lyrics..So oneday i was looking at some fantasy art..and there were a few pictures that inspired me..so i wrote what came to my mind at that time..

Spell bound by your touch...
I have lost so much...
Now the waite is over...
This i wanted so much...

The feel..The touch..it's so real..
In my dream..Forever i will sleep..

Enchantment i hold in my key..
Embrace me Oh hold me tight..
Together we will take this journey..
Forever in this endless night..

The feel..The touch..It's so real..
In my dream..Forever i will sleep..


Well that is what came to me...i was so proud of myself...this is the first i had ever done...I do want to add another verse..but i love the way it is..:icon_thum
 

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This is awesome Mandy Love, you should be very proud of this, I am proud of ya, killa job!!:thumb: :thumb:
 

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Pretty powerful stuff. But I wouldn't try to force another lyric if it's not natural. Leave it like it is if you are happy. Sure it's short, but better that than you forcefully screw it up just so it "looks" better as in it has more verses !!!

Very brave of you, but they are great lyrics !

If you do feel inspirational, then see what happens, but hopefully it will either come naturally or you will be happy to leave it as is !

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~Free Will~
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Thank you guys...means alot that you checked it out...ty so much:icon_thum
 

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Mandy,
Awesome job girl. Really liked them. Now this is a forum I can really get into. I will hopefully find some stuff I wrote that I feel is worthy enough to post. I hope I can provide something good. Awesome job again Mandy. Was great. :)
 

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~Free Will~
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Aww thanx so much D!!...I cant waite to read some of your stuff!!:icon_thum
 

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that was very creative, already making this forum worthwhile. Gr8 job!!
 

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Thank you Flair!
 
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