[DLYNN]

This is something I wrote for a friend of mine last year.​

Expectations​

It's been sometime since we spoke​

I've lost all hope for a better life​

So I lie isolated in this cold, dark room​

where dreams filled the spaces​

of better off places​

but I dare not visit them now​

And as I walked past the mirror​

I realized I hate the reflection staring back at me​

I wish I could be the one you want​

the one you obvisouly need​

I am sorry the damage I've done to you​

And the promises I could never keep​

Never told you I was going to be the one​

to live up to your expectations​

now the damage is done​

And I am sorry​

I'm sorry​

Maybe one day we'll make it right​

meet again without a fight​

take the time to understand​

what we felt​

how we dealt​

and what we mean to eachother​

For now I lay here restless​

My dreams escaping me​

Cause I never told you​

I was going to be the one​

to live up to your expectations​

now the damage has been done​

and I am sorry​

I'm sorry​

 

[SuckaInA3Piece]

I really like this one D. Great job. :bowdown:

 

[DLYNN]

I really like this one D. Great job. :bowdown:

Aww thank you sweetie, that means a lot! Thanks for reading!

 

[Goport]

Blimey. Very impressive, to be sure. I wish there was some resolve because it seems so sad - but that is obviously why you wrote it. Excellent stuff Dlynn.

 

[Beka4MikE]

Wow that really grabs at the soul......flow was great too

 

[DLYNN]

Thanks Goport and Mike for reading! Means a lot.

 

[stingx]

Wow, Dlynn, that really bummed me out I think it is very well written. All lyrics can't be an expression of joy and I like how the tone remains the same thoughout.

 

[Bennett]

very, very impressive.

 

[TopJimmy78]

This was great, great job D :thumb: :thumb:

 

[DLYNN]

Thanks Stingx, Bennett, and Jimmy. I really appreciate that you all read it. Thanks so much. You all are so sweet.

 

[rain]

Very nice Miss Vixon

 

[wigrocks]

Really great DLYNN, powerful stuff.

 

[DLYNN]

My sexy vixon, wigrocks....thank you both for your feedback. i appreciate you both checking it out. Mandy, we'll have to work together on something soon.