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This is something I wrote for a friend of mine last year.​


Expectations​

It's been sometime since we spoke​
I've lost all hope for a better life​
So I lie isolated in this cold, dark room​
where dreams filled the spaces​
of better off places​
but I dare not visit them now​
And as I walked past the mirror​
I realized I hate the reflection staring back at me​
I wish I could be the one you want​
the one you obvisouly need​
I am sorry the damage I've done to you​
And the promises I could never keep​

Never told you I was going to be the one​
to live up to your expectations​
now the damage is done​
And I am sorry​
I'm sorry​

Maybe one day we'll make it right​
meet again without a fight​
take the time to understand​
what we felt​
how we dealt​
and what we mean to eachother​

For now I lay here restless​
My dreams escaping me​

Cause I never told you​
I was going to be the one​
to live up to your expectations​
now the damage has been done​
and I am sorry​
I'm sorry​
 

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I really like this one D. Great job. :bowdown:
 

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SuckaIn3Piece said:
I really like this one D. Great job. :bowdown:
Aww thank you sweetie, that means a lot! :) Thanks for reading!
 

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Blimey. Very impressive, to be sure. I wish there was some resolve because it seems so sad - but that is obviously why you wrote it. Excellent stuff Dlynn.
 

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Thanks Goport and Mike for reading! Means a lot.
 

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Wow, Dlynn, that really bummed me out :( I think it is very well written. All lyrics can't be an expression of joy and I like how the tone remains the same thoughout.
 

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This was great, great job D :thumb: :thumb:
 

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Thanks Stingx, Bennett, and Jimmy. I really appreciate that you all read it. Thanks so much. :) You all are so sweet.
 

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My sexy vixon, wigrocks....thank you both for your feedback. i appreciate you both checking it out. Mandy, we'll have to work together on something soon.
 
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