[rjmjajrj]

Hey everyone,

I am thinking about writing a song and Im trying to come up with a rhythm I like. I came up with this. Just curious what you guys think. Does it suck or should I keep going with it.

The reason I ask is I dont have a lot off extra time so I dont want to waste it on a song with a crappy riff. Keep in my i haven't played a lot of guitar in the last 10 years. So go easy on me.

This is just a quick sample. The last 5 seconds is just nonsense so just ignore it please.

rjmjajrj

 

[rjmjajrj]

oops

oops. forgot the attachment.

 

[andrewtheshreddr]

nice!
very 80s..
cool interesting tone as well..
nice little lead around the middle..

 

[sgstd]

Keep going with it...definately!!!:thumb: Real potential with that riff!!

 

[bones_19l]

I was ready for billy idol to break into a verse.

cool harmonics. that was a tease. nice tone too

 

[rjmjajrj]

Thanks for listening guys. I probably keep going with it. What the hell. Thanks for the comments.

Later