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I wrote this song first as an acoustic guitar solo, but decided to do a full-fledged band arrangement. The lyrics are based on a personal situation with someone in my family - real Dr. Phil kind of stuff.
 

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This is really good. Good use of dynamics and a decent song structure. I love the little guitar break at 2:31 which reminded me of Glen Tilbrook from Squeeze. Great Stuff!
 

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nice stuff mate !

nicely written song and i like the little motif/riff thing that keeps coming back .. very cool indeed . the only thing to watch is clipping particuarly when teh drums pickup a bit you get a bit of distortion on the top end . . your vocals are pretty cool too overal it's a good song but just watch out for some mic clipping and you'll be set ! :thumb:
 

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This was awesome, killa job!!:icon_thum :icon_thum
 

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Stiglar said:
nice stuff mate !

nicely written song and i like the little motif/riff thing that keeps coming back .. very cool indeed . the only thing to watch is clipping particuarly when teh drums pickup a bit you get a bit of distortion on the top end . . your vocals are pretty cool too overal it's a good song but just watch out for some mic clipping and you'll be set ! :thumb:

Thanks for the tip and the nice comments. I think the clipping might be because the mix was too hot - the drums are all programmed.
 

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This was very very nice!!!!:thumb:
 
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