[CanyonCarver]

This is a heavy song I'd like to have somebody sing over.
It's not exactly what I'd call finished at his time, but you can get the idea.

It also needs lead work done, but all rythm is pretty much set.

I could use some feedback.

Thanks.

 

[zeppy]

very nice cc ! hope ya find someone to help ya out with that ! :icon_thum

 

[wahwah]

Nice....gotta sort of 'Heaven and Hell' Black Sabbath feel to my ears. The drums sound like they ain't quite connecting inplaces until the 1:50 area? Maybe make them more simple in the start off? Like the tone on the guitar. Good stuff! :thumb:

 

[CanyonCarver]

Thanks, Zeppy. Thanks Wahwah.

I've been using this tone a lot lately. It's a modified Iron Maiden tone I got from Line6. I made it mine and really like its feel.

I'll look at the drums, but the prob might be coming from my playing that's purposely pretty loose.

Good you recognized the Iommi influence. It's just what comes naturally when I hear this kind of heavy drums anyway. Can't help meself! :lol:

 

[Rythameen]

Very nice CC, love that tone, hope you find someone to help you finish it off.:bannana_g

 

[CanyonCarver]

Thanks, Rythameen. It's a solid Marshall tone with no BS.Glad you liked the tune too.
I haven't heard it since last night. I'll play it in the car on my way to work and am afraid I might hate it then. :lol:

 

[sgstd]

Can't go wrong with a no BS solid Marshall tone!!!!:woot: This is a cool comp, bro....can definately hear the Iommi influence!!!:jam:

 

[Goport]

Can't go wrong with a no BS solid Marshall tone!!!!:woot: This is a cool comp, bro....can definately hear the Iommi influence!!!:jam:

I'll go along with that. I love that bass sound too!

 

[CanyonCarver]

Thanks, Goport for the comment on the bass.

I had to input the bass parts by pushing a virtual keyboard with the mouse. No piece of cake. Good thing the MIDI allows you to nudge the notes to make things right, otherwise I'd still be doing this now. :lol:

It's a fingered bass with scooped EQ and some distortion applied through a modeled amp in Garage Band.

Anyone interested in singing their balls off to this tune? You also need to come up with vocals, or you can sing Mary Had A Little Lamb over it, but I think that the effect would be lost...

 

[Scott Parnell]

Hey CC. I have to tell ya that I really like this tune you have made. your tone is sooo killer,, and the rhythms are rockin'! This has alot of potential written all over it for sure. Hats off to you bud for making a rockin' tune here. I can't wait to hear this when it has a solo and some lyrics with it. :rock: :rock: :thumb:

 

[CanyonCarver]

There's a whole new version of this tune available here

Please check it ou instead.