I think it's really cool. The song is well-constructed with some cool chord progressions. The guitar plays a really important part as a melodic voice to tie everything together. The song has kind of a wistful feel to it. Very, very good for a first-timer. You have some good natural instincts.
I think this is great - good vocals and good solid playing. the only criticism I can offer is it sounds like the rhythm is slightly out of tune. other than that this is a great song, especially for a first timer :thumb:
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