[shanna]

Let me know what you guys think

https://home.comcast.net/~seanthanna/

sorry, i forgot i updated the file.

 

[nandk]

Are you serious? your first original, Thats pertty damn good for a first! If I posted my first original I would be kicked out of this forum for noise pollution. This is a great song!

 

[Rythameen]

Very nice, if this is your first original, then keep em comin. :bannana_g

 

[vash]

wow!! that was super killer! mellow and definitly smooth.

 

[guitarmageddon]

nice flowing

you need to work on your lead tone a little to bring it to a more professional sound but everything else sounds good man

what gear did you use?

recording and instruments...

sounds very GNR influenced..

 

[shanna]

thanks for the compliments guys. Yes this is my first original. I've been playing for a long time and recording for a couple years but I've mostly done covers because I thought I couldn't write lyrics. Well lately I've just been writing shit down all the time and even though it's still a chore, I've been able to write a few songs. I have another that's almost finished that I will post soon.

As for gear I use

Les Paul DI through a Digitech GNX3
Boss DR-880 for my drums
Ibanez bass through built-in GT-6 on my DR-880
Shure SM57 for vocals
Sonar 4PE

 

[shanna]

I just posted an updated version after I received some good feedback from the Sonar forums.

https://home.comcast.net/~seanthanna/dwtg 2.mp3

 

[LaceGuitarPlayer]

Dad gum Shanna, you are just.. really talented there... Nice instrumentals... excellent voice.

As a lyricist, I have to say, you starting with some great linage there. I always have a pen and paper handy. I've been writing for 32 years and have stacks of notebooks and paper with one liners waiting to be finished.. and if you get stuck, put it away but don't forget it. I have hundreds of songs finished that took years but then, I have hundreds that were finished in fifteen minutes or less...

And I'd like to play it on my show. :dance:

Janell

 

[shanna]

Thanks for the kind words Lace.

Feel free to play it on your show.

 

[SLoB]

cool, thers a hint of COC ther
great tune dude!

 

[Chris_76]

Nice tune! Kinda reminds me of Lemonheads from early 90's. Got the same laid back vocal style...I like it!

 

[Goport]

This is WELL good mate. excellent debut :thumb:

 

[wigrocks]

This was really great dude. Excellent debut for you. I think about the first tune I "attempted" to write, and immediately wish for a case of amnesia. You might want to edit your original post with the updated link. I almost missed this one, before looking through and finding the newer link. Great job, keep posting.

 

[shanna]

This was really great dude. Excellent debut for you. I think about the first tune I "attempted" to write, and immediately wish for a case of amnesia. You might want to edit your original post with the updated link. I almost missed this one, before looking through and finding the newer link. Great job, keep posting.

Thanks man, I appreciate all the compliments and thanks for the heads up on the link. I forgot I made some changes to the mix and reposted under a different name.