Hey everyone. It's nice to have a place to get people's opinions on my lyrics, when I try them on my friends, they just say,"that's deep man". I don't know if thats good or bad. Anyway here's something I wrote one night a couple weeks ago. :
When I am dreaming
Don't have to be sleeping
When I awaken
My joy has been taken
Sometimes I try reading
Stimulation I'm needing
If I am to survive
This eternity drive
For this road that I travel
Is twisted and narrow
And hazards are plenty
With wounds that bleed sorrow
Let me know what you guys think. :icon_cool
When I am dreaming
Don't have to be sleeping
When I awaken
My joy has been taken
Sometimes I try reading
Stimulation I'm needing
If I am to survive
This eternity drive
For this road that I travel
Is twisted and narrow
And hazards are plenty
With wounds that bleed sorrow
Let me know what you guys think. :icon_cool