[CanyonCarver]

Thanks Wahwah and all the other for constructive criticism.

The song has been manipulated and get right to the point, a lot quicker in this version.
I changed some of the riffs, and the order in which they come. Still very dark and heavy and I need some demented, like-minded singer to come and belt some vocals out all over it.

I hope you enjoy this tune and thanks for giving me some feedback if you get a chance.

for the latest mix, go here

 

[Scott Parnell]

sweet man! i like this version better imo. rockin !!!!! this is smooth! Is that just your pod 2.0 for the tone???? sweet tone!!!!:rock: :rock: :thumb:

 

[CanyonCarver]

Thanks, Scott.
It's just the POD.
I'm not done mixing the guitar though. I want to try to EQ it differently right and left to see if it gives it more dimension next...

 

[ericgtr]

Nice, crunchy and heavy tone there dude, great stuff!

 

[wahwah]

MUCH better but I'd bring the drums up slightly. The drum track works better with less changes. :thumb:

 

[Rid]

Fat and juicy track CC.
:icon_thum Sounds good to me.

 

[Rythameen]

A lot better, starting to sound really nice, I just wish the drums in the intro were a little more in your face.

 

[CanyonCarver]

Points taken, Wahwah and Rythameen. I have issues with my monitors and have to second guess the levels often times. It's touch and go until I find the right balance.

Thanks for leaving feedback.

 

[KC_ArtRocker]

I would agree about the drums needing to come up just a hair in volume (or perhaps the guitars a bit lower), but otherwise, this is a pretty rocking tune in a heavy slow-groove dark evil blues kinda way. Sounds almost influenced by Tony Iommi/Black Sabbath. Me likey. :rock:

 

[Mondy]

Bloody great, CC. It has a structure, strength and enough going on there for it to really get in your head and stick there.

I was really rocking out to this one. The tone and playing sound great. I love how it really takes off throughout the track.

Keep up the good work mate !

:thumb:

 

[CanyonCarver]

Thanks Mondola. I love how you get fired up by music. This is always a great pleasure to see read your comments.

OK, I changed the general EQ to take some of booming bass out of it, and lowered the guitar part.
I feel it's getting somewhere...

 

[rain]

Man Ben....That is one sexay tone you got there!...I love this stuff!:icon_evil

 

[CanyonCarver]

Thank you sweetie. I'm blusing now!

Glad you like how it's turning out.

 

[Beka4MikE]

nice Tone CC....me and my bro in law were tappin our feet

 

[CanyonCarver]

Thanks, Mikey! Glad I made you rock.

 

[Roy Bratbakken]

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Hey, CC!

Sounds great, dude!
Great tone and riffin'! :jam:
Man, you should have some mean vox put on this, it would surely kick some serious ass!

Keep Rockin'!

Roy.
:twisted:

Thanks Wahwah and all the other for constructive criticism.

The song has been manipulated and get right to the point, a lot quicker in this version.
I changed some of the riffs, and the order in which they come. Still very dark and heavy and I need some demented, like-minded singer to come and belt some vocals out all over it.

I hope you enjoy this tune and thanks for giving me some feedback if you get a chance.

for the latest mix, go here

 

[nandk]

This rocks, nice dark vibe.

 

[VHF]

Thanks Mondola. I love how you get fired up by music. This is always a great pleasure to see read your comments.

OK, I changed the general EQ to take some of booming bass out of it, and lowered the guitar part.
I feel it's getting somewhere...

This mix does sound a bit better......a bit more bite. I heard a Zakk ping in there....cool!

 

[CanyonCarver]

This mix does sound a bit better......a bit more bite. I heard a Zakk ping in there....cool!

Yes, I can't help placing a ping here and there. In fact, I have to restrain myself most of the time! :lol:

I've come up with more changes to implement to the playing, so there's going to be a Mark III soon.
I'm still hoping that someone will offer to sing over this.