[shanna]

Here is my 3rd original. It's a tune about my friend who I lost at the age of 23 to cancer.

http://www.soundclick.com/util/downloadSong.cfm?ID=2570564

Have a listen and let me know what you think.

Thanks,
Sean

 

[wigrocks]

no attachment?

 

[shanna]

no attachment?

sorry about that. I just added the link.

thanks for the heads up!

 

[wigrocks]

cool stuff!!! Your voice reminds me of somebody, and it's killing me trying to think of who it is... I liked the arrangement a lot, great job :thumb:

 

[Rythameen]

Very nice song, sorry about your friend.

 

[shanna]

Thanks for the listens guys. I appreciate the feedback.

What do you think of the mix? I'm leaning toward doing some kind of echo/delay during the vocals in the extended bridge after the 2nd chorus to make them stand out more. I'm also not sure if I like the backup vocals during the chorus. Let me know your opinions.

wigrocks-when you think of who I remind you of let me know, I'm curious.

 

[Goport]

Good song mate. nice arrangement and confident vox. cool stuff :thumb:

 

[JPF]

Real nice ...... very smooth and subdued style. Mix is really pretty good on it , and yes, could maybe use some back vox, maybe a call and response style on the chorus??. Really good job:thumb: :icon_peac