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Rain drops on the window..
Coolness of the damp air..
Classic rock on the radio..
A gloomy day with out a care..

I see you there in my mind..
A smile of an angel..
The twinkle in your eyes..
Makes my heart roar like a bangel..

Miles away you are..
Dreaming of that day..
The day you take my heart..
I love you..I will say..

Tuck me in tonight..
Hold me close to you..
This feeling i cant fight..
I want you..I need you..

Take me..I say to you..
Kissing your lips so sweet..
Our bodies begin to move..
With wild passionate heat..

Tightly I hold you to me..
Feeling so safe and warm..
Ive never felt so loved and free..
Your gentle touches and sweet charm..

Miles away soon no more..
Open arms we will see..
Embracing our love will soar..
Forever above the clouds will be..

~Mandy~
 

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Wow, very powerful. So I have to ask: Who is this to becuase it really seems to be to someone, but you genuinely made the effort to reference the distance between the two of you... Maybe I shouldn't have asked?:icon_nono Very nice though.
 

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Wow!!!! :bowdown: This is soo awesome Mandy Love, I am soo proud of you!!!!:icon_thum :icon_thum
 

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Well i live in like a fantasy world EJ...and i have quite an amagination...So i write what is in my mind..thank you for reading it hun!:thumb: So the things i write is like a story book...:)
 

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No need to thank me EJ....I enjoy sharing my thoughts ...and it means alot knowing that you guys enjoy reading in return:thumb:
 

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Very impressive mandy - this sounds like a song in the making. Are you going to record it? :thumb:
 

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Thank you Porty...Thank you Matt...I would love to have some of you guys put my poems as songs..just to hear my own words sang by others would sooo touch my heart!!!:icon_peac
 

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Thats totaly awsome it is quite touching in a way and very powerful at that.
 

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Another beautiful writing miss vixon. lol I love your style. I can relate to your writings. :)
 
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