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Well I wrote a song about a sign I saw that said please dispose of sanitary napkins in garbage not toilet and I immediatly thought of this girl I cant stop thinking about
well things got better and I changed the song into something positive near the end
at least to me
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Great sounding rythym and nice harmonic squealin', man. Love the distant sounding guitar in the middle, slow section, it makes it sound haunting. Only criticism is it gets just a bit repetitive in the end, I would just change it up a bit. Great work man. :thumbup:
 

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Good jam and nice finger work. I didn't care too much for the ending. I wouldv'e done the stretch a few times then kick back into a hard ending? Just my opinion but what do I know LOL......the rest of the tune was great! :icon_peac
 
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